Oh, I like this chapter a lot. There's real intimacy growing between them and the power imbalance is starting to become a little more equal. The bit where Ahmed's fascinated with the book, especially the pictures, *g* is adorable. Plus, I hadn't realized until this chapter that you were bringing the other warriors in as well. D'oh! Nice to see them showing up.
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Date: 2009-01-28 03:34 pm (UTC)